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A retired portal gaurd that now photoshops for the entertainment of the BBS.
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GOOD: Again, superb graphics and voice acting. I liked how there were two credit pictures. This series keeps getting more promising with each episode.
BAD: None
IMPROVE: None
OVERALL: This episode was throbbing enough to drink steroid-contaminated punch drinks just for the Hell of it. I'm looking forward to your next episode. You're doing a great job and keep up the good work.
Author's Response:
thanks!
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GOOD: This is definitely the best one in the entire trilogy. It kept me bust for a while. The music was quite catchy and the humour was quite amusing. I loved all the Newgrounds references and the animation added in a professional look.
BAD: Shame that you won't do a forth one.
IMPROVE: You already improved so much.
OVERALL: This is definitely a worth while game that gave me the back-to-school jittery feeling. I got stuck a lot so you lived up to hardest. The whole trilogy was excellent and I had fun. Near perfection. Excellent job.
Author's Response:
...The fourth will be even better =)
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GOOD: The chuckles from this flash were worth it. I love school satire very much and this was a good skit. The graphics were alright, the audio was good and the animation was alright.
BAD: Ending wasn't all that good in my opinion.
IMPROVE: Personally, I would find it hilarious if the person just freaked out and stabbed the borrower to death with his school supplies and yelling out stuff like, "YOU WANT TO BORROW MY PENCIL AGAIN?!? I'LL LEND YOU MY PENCIL!" and then repeatedly stabs the borrower with the pen and does that with other objects as well. You can also add in some background music too.
OVERALL: It was a good satire with a not-so-great ending. I do hate it when people borrow my stuff and give it back damaged or end up not returning it at all. You should make a series off school satire flashes poking fun at everyday school problems.
Author's Response:
What the hell are you talking about the ending was the best part. If you repeatedly stabbed him the joke would get old real fast, its funnier to see him suffer, plus he says im going to need that back at the end of class. FUCKING GENIUS!
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GOOD: All that stop motion effects were amazing! You have serious potential!
BAD: the ending was quite abrupt.
IMPROVE: You should make a stop motion series kind of like Knox and BlakTornado. I also suggest a proper ending for this flash.
OVERALL: It was also another fine practice you did. The effects were quite good and I know you will make a decent stop-motion animator, especially for your age!
Author's Response:
Thanks for your review. This is just the hing of CC that I want.
A series is an interesting sudggestion, and I am really thinking about making a series with the kind of charachters I used in the end, but I think that would end up as a rip-off of knox.
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GOOD: That was a beautiful flash movie there. I really liked the artwork, especially with the backgrounds and I do enjoy Greek myths. The music was also perfect for a chase scene between the horse and the panther. Ah Hell, the overall music selection was perfect.
BAD: None
IMPROVEMENT: None
OVERALL: Your talent makes me envious especially with the art. This is a top-notch flash movie that shows people that flash doesn't have to be realistic to be enjoyable. Excellent job, sport!
Author's Response:
'Sport'? Haha Cheers man :)
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GOOD: This was a good start. I was once a fan of clock flashes and I'm intrigued by this introduction of a promising flash. The graphics were clean; the sounds were smooth along with the animation. A few parts were amusing such as the Disneyland sign.
BAD: Too short.
IMPROVEMENT: The next one should be longer with more humour.
OVERALL: This looks like a promising flash. I'll be sure to check out the other flash and good luck on your next one.
Author's Response:
Thanks man :D
I know it was too short, and the next one will be longer.
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GOOD: Definitely one of the better Wiggi World submissions. I liked how it was all madness after a while and this gave me a workout for my index finger. The voice acting was good and the graphics were great and this game is definitely polished for a professional game.
BAD: None
IMPROVEMENT: None
OVERALL: Congrats on winning first place and spend your $4,000 wisely. This game was fun to play and I know for a fact that a lot of kids will enjoy this.
Author's Response:
Thanks for the kind words. :) There's definitely some bad points you're overlooking, as other players have pointed out below, but this was the best I could do within the deadline. I polished it as much as I could, and I took advantage of most of the suggestions I got from players before the deadline.
As for the money, I'll sure try not to waste any of it. :) It came as a shot in the arm when I needed it the most, and this could represent a turning point in my Flash career. I guess we'll have to wait and see if I can make this a regular thing.
Thanks for the review. :)
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GOOD: This short made my morning. I liked the part where the father got all abusive towards his son and it had me laugh out loud as a result. The graphics and sound were at their best.
BAD: None
IMPROVEMENT: None
OVERALL: It was a good short that provided me with a quick laugh for the morning. Good job.
Author's Response:
Thank you.
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GOOD: This was a cute game to play and it should help the little kids to use their heads to tell what they need to click for extra points.
BAD: A few flaws with the game play.
IMPROVEMENT: You should have more variation with the animals popping up in different locations and have a couple lives where you can lose them if you click the wrong animals. At least there would be more incentive to click the right animals because they could just click all the animals really fast. You can also add in different difficulties so it's more appealing to all different players with different reaction times.
OVERALL: A cute game that the kids will enjoy. Good luck on the Wiggi World contest
Author's Response:
Thanks
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GOOD: It was an alright idea for the basic part but with the situation where you need to know some math to compete the missions were excellent ideas. It would really be useful to test out some of the kid's math solving skills while playing a fun game. The graphics were good and the game play overall was very good.
BAD: Quite tricky even for me.
IMPROVEMENT: None
OVERALL: It was challenging and fun and it also required players to use their heads. You don't see many games like these on the internet. Good luck on the Wiggi World contest.
Author's Response:
Thanks for your review. And yeah, my main worry was that it might be too hard for some of the younger kids, but i guess we'll just have to wait and see =|
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