Score: 8

"Great Job"

submission: South Park goes HP

date: August 1, 2007

GOOD: This was a box of chocolates. I liked how you used previous dialogue from past South Park episodes and how you combined my favorite sitcom to a good movie series. It had me laugh out loud at the battle between Stan and Cartman because it was so cheesy. The graphics were clean and had quite a smooth animation.

BAD: The voices were soft.

IMPROVEMENT: You could try better sound quality for the voices and perhaps make it longer with more comedy. This flash has more potential than you think.

OVERALL: It was a good South Park parody that deserves to be in the South Park collection for sure. Hell, it's one of the few South Park parodies that are actually good. Great job.

Score: 8

"Excellent"

submission: Clock Suckers Episode 4

date: July 3, 2007

GOOD: Destroying a good future just for a stereotypical future? Oh yes! I found it to be quite entertaining with the plot of corrupting the future. Again, everything is television quality.

BAD: Not as funny as the others.

IMPROVEMENT: None

OVERALL: It was not as funny as the rest of them but it was still pretty good. I hope you make more in the future.

Score: 9

"Excellent!"

submission: Clock Suckers Episode 2

date: July 3, 2007

GOOD: They keep on getting more and more promising. It was television quality as usual and had me laughing with its good quality humour. Keep these coming!

BAD: None

IMPROVEMENT: None

OVERALL: It was another piece of entertaining material. They are really wiping uot my summer boredom.

Score: 9

"Excellent"

submission: Clock Suckers Episode 1

date: July 3, 2007

GOOD: This was pretty good with the graphics and good voice acting and the great humour that had me laughing a couple times. This had me burn some boredom off for my summer vacation time. Too good for television.

BAD: None

IMPROVEMENT: None

OVERALL: This was very entertaining like the last one I watched earlier today. You did a really good job at this and I’m going to check out your other ones.

Score: 9

"Excellent!"

submission: Clock Suckers Episode 3

date: July 3, 2007

GOOD: Now this was a good piece of entertainment for my step-brother and I. We were laughing quite a bit and the flash was like something you would see on television. The graphics and voice acting was television worthy and was pretty funny. This episode makes us want to see the rest of the Clock Suckers series.

BAD: None

IMPROVEMENT: None

OVERALL: This was very entertaining for the beginning of summer holidays. Excellent job on this work of art!

Score: 5

"Could be better"

submission: MK vs SF 1.5

date: July 2, 2007

GOOD: It was not that bad for your first flash movie. I liked how you made a tribute to my favorite flashes and made Raiden win. The ending was also amusing.

BAD: Poor graphics, slow-paced action, short cheap battle and lacks detail.

IMPROVEMENT: First, you can make the flash go faster due to the fights looking a bit slow and fake-looking. You can also add in detail by making the characters move while standing and make sure there is no white background on it. While Raiden is in the Heavens, try adding in pictures of the sky for a background. You can also add in more clever combat moves other than Raiden’s cheap stop-time-while-kicking-ass attack. You can make the battle longer in your next flash. I noticed that the red guy then disappeared while Raiden was forming into one again, please fix that. I also noticed near the end of the battle, there are spines floating before Raiden rip off their heads.

OVERALL: Since this is your first flash, I’ll cut you some slack and give you a 5/10.You have some potential and good luck on your next flash movie.

Score: 7

"Good"

submission: Another Maple Story

date: July 1, 2007

GOOD: This was amusing to watch and I did laugh a few times (Like the Charlie Brown reference for example) and I found it to be somewhat true about role-playing games. The graphics were alright and the voice acting was also alright.

BAD: Some of the voices from Speakonia.

IMPROVEMENT: Try more voice actors for the minor characters.

OVERALL: It was a fun flash movie to watch. It was also a decent satire of role playing games.

Score: 8

"Not bad at all!"

submission: Fat Badger's: Apocalypto

date: July 1, 2007

GOOD: This had me laughing near the end because of its absurdity. The graphics were pretty unique and I liked them very much and the use of the sound effects was pretty well used. The story was quite random. The absurd humour is what won me over.

BAD: None

IMPROVEMENT: None

OVERALL: This was a box of chocolates. It had me laughing so this is an automatic high review score. I really like your goofy sense of humour.

Score: 8

"Pretty Good"

submission: Sun Stories

date: June 28, 2007

GOOD: This is a unique and original game. I liked how have to learn the keyboard keys in order to get stars while having to avoid asteroids at the same time. I also liked the sun’s look on his face and I also liked the gameplay of it all.

BAD: None

IMPROVEMENT: None

OVERALL: This flash game is a sunny day of a game. I liked the concept of this game. Pretty entertaining this game is.

Score: 6

"Alright"

submission: Luigi's Bad Day

date: June 28, 2007

GOOD: Nice sprite movie. The graphics may not have been made by you but they fit together perfectly and you had a nice use of the various sounds used in this flash movie. The humour was alright and gave me a few kicks.

BAD: Not really my kind of humour.

IMPROVEMENT: None

OVERALL: It was an amusing sprite flash movie with some alright humour.