Score: 7

"Could be better"

submission: Achilles

date: January 24, 2008

GOOD: A good fighting war game set in a historical setting. It burned up some free time with all the hacking and slashing. I liked how the enemy's looks changed from level to level.

BAD: Gets repetitive.

IMPROVE: This could use some more work. You could add in a health bar for both the hero and the enemies to indicate how many hits you need. Different scenery would be nice like the Temple of Zeus or Athens under siege instead of just a beach. There can be more weaponry and enemies like cavalry. Horses would be nice to have to trample and better speed and the best way to kill a horse is throwing a spear at it. Like one of the previous reviews said, try adding in some sort of upgrade system to upgrade weapons, health, speed and repair any damage and you get to purchase by killing enemies and getting bonuses from how much health you have left.

OVERALL: It was a simple decent game that kept me busy but it still could use more work because it gets quite repetitive after a while.

Score: 9

"Good"

submission: The Ghoul and the Girl

date: January 23, 2008

GOOD: It was original, good graphics, good animation, good Scottish accent, decent poetry, some amusing moments, and an unexpected twist making it an enjoyable fairy tale.

BAD: None

IMPROVE: None

OVERALL: It was a good and original Flash animation with a good visual of a poem. The Scottish accent was perfect for this Flash. Hell, I'm surprised that I didn't even think of Shrek while watching this. Good job, lad!

Score: 8

"Good Job."

submission: Faith Fighter

date: January 23, 2008

GOOD: I'm a Christian and I had loads of fun with this game. It had good artwork, good animation and was a great fighting game with religious figures. I literally laughed when I found out that Xenu was the last boss. I had fun..

BAD: None

IMPROVE: You could add in more religious figures like Moses and make it like Super Smash Bros. with famous religious figures if you are up for it.

OVERALL: It was a fun game that had me entertained. Sure I may have some explaining to do in the afterlife but at least it made my morning. Take that, Xenu!

Score: 8

"Good"

submission: RepublicaSocialistaMundia

date: January 9, 2008

GOOD: Soviet propaganda Flash at its best. The graphics were simple and clean and it bears a good resemblance to the Soviet messages of Communism fighting against the capitalist world to maintain equality for everyone. The vocals were a nice touch and the feeling of propaganda was very nice.

BAD: I didn't like how some scenes repeated over again and some animation was a little rusty.

IMPROVE: I would try to avoid repeating some scenes over again and try to add unique scenes without the same scenes for a second go on the lyrics.

OVERALL: Bravo, comrade! This is indeed a good Soviet propaganda flash with great potential. It could use a bit more work but it was a job well done.

Score: 6

"Alright but too short."

submission: Terrorist Bloopers!

date: December 25, 2007

GOOD: The last one made me laugh a little. It was a good idea to show whatever bloopers may arise from terrorism videos.

BAD: Too short.

IMPROVE: If you could add in more bloopers than I could give you a higher score. This flash has great potential.

OVERALL: A potential flash that could be much better. I didn't think too much with the first two but the third one made me laugh. Just make it longer with at least a few more bloopers.

Score: 8

"Nice!"

submission: Trick Shark

date: December 1, 2007

GOOD: Holy crap that was unexpected with the whole Trick Shark music video clips. I liked the blend of serious and comedic themes that really made the flash a box of chocolates. It had me laugh out loud a few times.

BAD: None

IMPROVE: None

OVERALL: A nice blend of two entirely different genres. Hahaha, Trick Shark is indeed much unexpected and tricked me a few times.

Score: 7

"Alright"

submission: I Am Dateowulf

date: December 1, 2007

GOOD: The humour was quite promising, the graphics and voice acting was good and I got a laugh at the end. I plan to see Beowulf someday and I find this to be very amusing.

BAD: Poor sound quality for Beowulf. I could hardly understand some of the words he said.

IMPROVE: Once Beowulf is out on DVD or whatever, try to make Beowulf's sound quality better. This flash has quite potential.

OVERALL: It was an amusing flash that gave me a kick near the end. I liked how you tried to make a conversation between Beowulf and a father. It could've been better though.

Score: 7

"Good"

submission: Charlie Brownstain Xmas

date: December 1, 2007

GOOD: Hilarious. Just friggin' hilarious that had me laughing out loud quite a few times. This is probably the best Charlie Brown parody I have ever seen on Newgrounds. The voice acting was also acceptable.

BAD: The graphics don't look so great.

IMPROVE: You should improve the graphics because they looked quite crude. You can add in more detail such as shading.

OVERALL: Aside from the poor graphics, it was a great Charlie Brown parody that was really funny and was also fun to watch. Good job at the humour.

Score: 6

"Alright"

submission: The Jersey Devil

date: October 30, 2007

GOOD: Best when played in the dark. The graphics were alright with some OK sounds. It was bloody and that is how many horror movies are like today.

BAD: The Jersey Devil appearance was inaccurate and the plot has been done before.

IMPROVE: I would recommend researching information about the Jersey Devil and maybe you can add more scenes to the flash so there can be suspense and thrills while they are all trying to get away. Maybe you can have the kid get chased as well to add in some suspense so it won't be as predictable.

OVERALL: It was an alright flash. Not the best I have seen but certainly not the worst either and so it could use more work.

Score: 8

"Good"

submission: Nursery Grimes

date: October 30, 2007

GOOD: Pretty eerie nursery rhymes. It is best played in the dark and it does give me an eerie feeling when the time is right. The voice was perfect for each one and the music fits in well for extra eerie effect.

BAD: Not a whole lot of nursery rhymes to offer.

IMPROVE: I would add in more nursery rhymes and make a bigger collection of them. That would give it more replay value.

OVERALL: It was a good Halloween flash that was very eerie to watch. I would shit out a brick if Old Willie Winkie came to my room.