Score: 7

"Nice!"

submission: Snow Fight

date: December 17, 2009

GOOD: I loved how this escalated from a little snow fight into full scale war with overkill snow weapons. The child looked so damaged that I just laughed. The graphics and the animation were good.

BAD: The voice acting was pretty bad. The voices sounded like they were recorded by a really bad microphone.

IMPROVE: Perhaps you could make the voices more clear and more believable.

OVERALL: This was a funny flash with a twist on snow fights. Just work on the voice acting and you would have a perfect score.

Score: 7

"A crude version of Disney's beloved bear."

submission: Whiny the pooh

date: December 9, 2009

GOOD: The style of it and the voice acting reminds me of those flashes like the Sicksons and Spongebob Sickpants. I laughed at the part where someone throws him honey and calls him a fat bastard. The animation was good and the background music was ironic for its happy Disney tone.

BAD: Too short.

IMPROVE: I'm sure there are a lot of other things that can be made fun of about Whinny the Pooh and his friends. You could portray the other critters in this style or how they interact with each other.

OVERALL: This flash had potential but fell short of what I was expecting. I still had a kick out of it so I can give you that. I guess it can be one of those flashes where it's short and sweet. Good job.

Score: 9

"I love it"

submission: Blackhead

date: December 8, 2009

GOOD: I'm a big fan of old cartoons especially from the World War II era. This cartoon was like those stereotypical blackface films/cartoon. The animation was swell and the humour was like a classic American cartoon style. The "N***** Alarm" with the cop looking shocked cracked me up and I love that police man's face.

BAD: Going to piss off a lot of people.

IMPROVE: None

OVERALL: It's a very well made if not sarcastic view of old day cartoons of my Great Grandfather's day. I enjoyed watching it a few times and I'm going to get my ass kicked by a few people for liking this cartoon.

Score: 7

"My very own emo!"

submission: Emogotchi v2.0

date: December 8, 2009

GOOD: I like these kinds of games where I can abuse things. I found it fun to drive him into suicide or driving him to be worn out or sick to the point of fatality.

BAD: limited options and death sequence variety.

IMPROVE: For the current options, you can give a different death for the health and energy deficient deaths such as a sick emo puking and then fainting and an emo panting and trying to catch his breathe after being worn out. I would also suggest more activities with him and more ways to abuse him. Perhaps you can make a randomized method of suicide when he gets to the point of suicide.

OVERALL: It's not the best virtual pet game I ever played but it was fun while it lasted with me experimenting with methods to kill him. Perhaps a sequel to this game will do with more diverse options and methods. It had potential handling an emo.

Score: 10

"Haha, nice!"

submission: Polly wants a cracker!

date: December 8, 2009

GOOD: The animation was good as well as the graphics. The music sounded like something from a SNES which I find swell. I was giggling when it showed a fat parrot coughing up crackers from eating too much.

BAD: None

IMPROVE: None

OVERALL: I must say, it started out as a parrot begging for a cracker over and over again. I was wondering what the point was until he said he wasn't Polly and pointed at a parrot after eating too many crackers. At that point I was laughing and got the joke. Good job, I honestly didn't expect the end.

Score: 10

"He'd snap sooner or later."

submission: The Charlie Brown Murders

date: November 18, 2009

GOOD: This had good graphics and animation to make it look like e genuine cartoon. I loved the voices and the idea of Charlie Brown with a katana. The music selection was a great choice and fit in well with the scenes. It was very odd in a good way and I loved Charlie's face when he smiles evilly.

BAD: None

IMPROVE: None

OVERALL: It's like that ancient Newgrounds classic, "You're a raging psychopath, Snarlie Brown" except updated with today's Flash standards. I really had fun watching it as it was creepy and made me laugh a few times.

Score: 1

"Eh..."

submission: Under The Influence!

date: November 16, 2009

GOOD: I love satire and I think those "Above the Influence" commercials need a parody.

BAD: The graphics and animation were minimalist and the audio was annoying.

IMPROVE: I would say remake the whole thing so it doesn't look like you made it during lunch break. You could add in more detail or colour on certain things in the graphics and you could add in more animation like the dog walking with his legs moving instead of tweening. Voice acting would also be nice and maybe a better selection of music.

OVERALL: It was a nice concept but it was poorly executed. Even though I gave tips on how to improve, I'm going to assume this wasn't an honest-to-God serious attempt at making a commercial parody. Sorry but this style does not work for me however others may disagree with me.

Score: 5

"Amusing."

submission: 2012 in 30 seconds

date: November 14, 2009

GOOD: I saw 2012 last night and I enjoyed it and I also love satire on things I like. This pretty much explains most of the movie and after the flash I got a chuck.

BAD: Bad graphics and animation.

IMPROVE: Spend some more time drawing the graphics and take the time to animate. The graphics and animation really need to be improved in order for me to take this flash more seriously.

OVERALL: Like I said, I enjoy satire and this was a good shot at a movie I enjoyed. However, the graphics and animation were lacking so poorly that I can't really give much for this. I would recommend a remake that doesn't look so rushed.

Score: 10

"Nice"

submission: Dr. Mario with Lyrics

date: November 12, 2009

GOOD: The song was very nice as it was catchy and funny. The graphics were nice and the animation was swell. I loved the Dr. Mario concept being parodied with him being an actual doctor with music. I had a few chuckles as well.

BAD: None

IMPROVE: None

OVERALL: Well done, it was a very entertaining flash. I like Mario and this is one of the better music videos I've seen lately on this website. Now take two of these 5's and call me in the morning.

Score: 9

"Badda Boom, Bitch!"

submission: Santa's Last Stop

date: November 12, 2009

GOOD: This was so funny I giggled like a Japanese school girl. I like your style of graphics and the voice acting was superb. It also had some memorable quotes that made me laugh and I swear, this brings out the inner child in me.

BAD: A graphic error where it shows little Billy's eyes at the back of his head and I saw the ending coming.

IMPROVE: Draw more hair on the back of little Billy's head to cover the eyes while he was in front of Santa.

OVERALL: With the Christmas holidays coming up I had a major laugh at this even though the ending was predictable. Great job at this, I love how you drew Santa.