Score: 7

"Nice!"

submission: Snow Fight

date: December 17, 2009

GOOD: I loved how this escalated from a little snow fight into full scale war with overkill snow weapons. The child looked so damaged that I just laughed. The graphics and the animation were good.

BAD: The voice acting was pretty bad. The voices sounded like they were recorded by a really bad microphone.

IMPROVE: Perhaps you could make the voices more clear and more believable.

OVERALL: This was a funny flash with a twist on snow fights. Just work on the voice acting and you would have a perfect score.

Score: 7

"A crude version of Disney's beloved bear."

submission: Whiny the pooh

date: December 9, 2009

GOOD: The style of it and the voice acting reminds me of those flashes like the Sicksons and Spongebob Sickpants. I laughed at the part where someone throws him honey and calls him a fat bastard. The animation was good and the background music was ironic for its happy Disney tone.

BAD: Too short.

IMPROVE: I'm sure there are a lot of other things that can be made fun of about Whinny the Pooh and his friends. You could portray the other critters in this style or how they interact with each other.

OVERALL: This flash had potential but fell short of what I was expecting. I still had a kick out of it so I can give you that. I guess it can be one of those flashes where it's short and sweet. Good job.

Score: 9

"I love it"

submission: Blackhead

date: December 8, 2009

GOOD: I'm a big fan of old cartoons especially from the World War II era. This cartoon was like those stereotypical blackface films/cartoon. The animation was swell and the humour was like a classic American cartoon style. The "N***** Alarm" with the cop looking shocked cracked me up and I love that police man's face.

BAD: Going to piss off a lot of people.

IMPROVE: None

OVERALL: It's a very well made if not sarcastic view of old day cartoons of my Great Grandfather's day. I enjoyed watching it a few times and I'm going to get my ass kicked by a few people for liking this cartoon.

Score: 10

"Good"

submission: Mute City [Box-Killa]

date: December 9, 2009

This song is very catchy with the diverse sounds that interlock and progress. It really reminds me of a level in a videogame on SNES. Right now I am very happy I decided to check this out.

I can't really describe how well made this is as I'm no expert at making music.

Good job.

Score: 6

"Keep Practicing."

submission: Brain Damage Cover Demo

date: April 30, 2009

This isn't the best guitar solo I've ever heard of. It had a few "squeeks" and guitar flaws here and there but this is your first submission and you tried so I can at least give you that.

I'd say keep practicing and make a full song and maybe your friends can add in with other instruments. It's not bad for your first so keep trying. Who knows, you might make a really good song after some time of practicing and experimentation.

Good try for your first so keep trying, buddy! =D

Score: 9

"Good"

submission: Narwhals Tune

date: March 24, 2009

I first heard this in your flash movie. I liked the flash and the song is so catchy and addicting. You always have the most absurd and random music for your looping music videos.

This song tells why Narwhales are so awesome.